Thursday, December 13, 2012

Laundry ...




All's quieter than the halls outside when
We walk into a department store:
The clothes absorb the sound. Soft
And layered by the hundreds. Racks and
Tables, dangling full and pancake-piled,
Absorbing the laughter, the calls out,
The frustrated groan-hum whispers
Between us, the half-dozen
Twenty-somethings in a mall.

That's why we do laundry and
Close the wash-room door:
Not because the cotton goes stale
With sweat and oil under arms, stiffening
Down the back, yellowing the neck,
Blah, blah; not because the metal
Bin clacks against shirt buttons,
Zippers, folded-in change, or
Its own loose joints tapping.

We close that door because the
Sound comes out: along with
Nose drips and mud skids billow the
sobs and Hoo-rahs that vibrated shirts
on their insides; with pasta sauce and semen,
the haranguing Dammits and guttural throat putters
That were cast across table- and bed-sheets; with excess dyes,
all the manic chaos drunken in by an un-racked jacket (drowning out the
half-hearted buyer's Coo in the soft, fading, weekend shirt that wore it home).

4 comments:

  1. Ellie said I should make this into a children's book. Consider it on my to-do list.

    Until then, here's the bookmark.

    * Thanks to David (Greek ruins cylinder), Julie (window ladies), James (banquet tables, Cairo market dress) & an old arcade card for making this collage full.

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  2. This poem explores the transition from brand-new, unworn, unwashed clothing to garments full of life, mess, and unique experiences. Shopping malls put their products on display as if the mannequins are people doing everyday activities in everyday clothing, but this is not the reality of life. Life is not so clean or perfect, and the clothing we wear is rarely as put together as in a window display. You write that “the clothes absorb the sound” and this is completely true. There is no expression of real life in a shopping mall, and it is not until the clothing has been through a thorough wearing that it expresses real life.
    In the last stanza the poem comes to it conclusion for why we close the washing machine door on our clothing: “because the sound comes out.” It is only with being worn through daily experiences that clothing takes on a deeper meaning; they are an expression of where we have been and what has happened to us while we were in them. It is only with being worn that clothing can be given life. The washing machine is a loud expression of the turmoil that has occurred in the lives of the clothing, as well as the difficulties and struggles faced throughout life. Washing naturally means that something will be cleaner afterwards, and the same is true here. After the clothes have been cleansed, the proverbial slate is wiped clean and new events and emotions can be experienced without the baggage of the past. It is a cycle of how to healthfully experience the world; how to remember the traumas, but how to also let them go, allowing yourself to be open to new and different experiences.

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    1. Right? I have so many clothes that I bought because they looked cool. But I always put back on the old beat-up clothes, because I didn't mind getting them dirty; being alive in them.

      After a while, I find that I forget about those fancy-looking shirts and pants. It's my ratty hoodie that keeps me warm, my too-large shorts and sweatpants-gray t-shirt that I've filled with my best moments in life.

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  3. This one is great because it dwells on the details that practically everyone can relate to. People notice but never question the fact that the surplus of clothes in stores work to silence its surroundings, but everyone experienced it. It was the very reason that hiding in the racks as a child was so fun, it transported you into another world away from the shopping adults. Everybody knows that noise that dryers make while they wash worn out clothes, the annoying clanking. The poem becomes even more interesting when you give these experiences everyone knows a different meaning, allowing them to represent the bigger idea of life. This is why it brought a smile to my face, not only reminding me of things I have experienced but never acknowledged, but also giving the events a hidden meaning.

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