Saturday, September 1, 2012

Savior to savior ...



Vine.
You are mine.
 Just this time, and not for long,
   caught you hanging
    from the sky
       as wind ran fluting
      around my ears,
       a rushing song –
          some “Yoooouuuu
            areGoin'toDieeee...”
         half-truth, like
       most I think
       I hear.

          But
              then you struck
                  an arm, cut my scream: I held
                        you (dangling
                            severe as I,
                               beyond the tree rings,
                                 fell). Still faller,
                                 You hold me well
                               and tighter
                               than the air: I fly
                                  in a swing
                                       (your creak, my
                                           holler,

                                              Our
                                             balanced hour).
                                            Nothing now destroys but joy:
                                                you crack, stretching
                                                        in my grip,
                                                          while I tire, squeezing
                                                              your twining green.
                                                                No hand nor pain
                                                               feeling,
                                                                 my trembling slip
                                                                begins: our
                                                                coming fall
                                                                 becomes
                                                                care-
                                                              less
                                                            be-
                                                         tw
                                                        ee
                                                          n.

1 comment:

  1. Does the poem make sense. At least intuitively? I hope so. Just trying to illuminate the mirror: men actively seeking acceptance while women wait for coming interest (and the silence in the air around both feels teeming with invisible judgment) – like apes and vines, men and women, each in a kind of free-fall. And when they meet, it's seldom forever: at some point, one can no longer hold on, the other can no longer sustain it, or both – and then the scrambling, of a lonely free-fall begins again.
    But in those passing moments of strained connection, each sustains the other: the constant dread of falling and the constant emptiness of dangling alone retreat into the background for a while, until that careless sanctuary breaks – such is the nature of things in this jungle.

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