Monday, December 14, 2015

Songerel (a synthesis) ...



Such a funny little thing, this life I
Keep inside me: dreams that make me sick at
Night and around-bend smells that guide me; a sky
Whose eddies conduct my mood (whether flat
Or roiled, I join in); fellow dancers with whom
(Whether trance-lambs or saints) I'm compelled
To toss my coin in; then the crash-bang-boom
Of a stumble, of an oxidized bell
coming down from the rafters—all shaded
and still—makes me leap from the doldrums of
Circadian half-pipes to laughter: hallowed
For its spirit, yet condemned like a drug
For its act—which makes farce of the holy
(The best in us reminds us we are lowly).

1 comment:

  1. A sonnet on being human; the comedic meeting of awareness and instinct.

    *{Note, parallel to this, the poem's dual rhyme-scheme: an end-rhyme that is regular and predictable (I-at-sky-flat-whom-compelled-boom-bell-etc.), yet hardly noticeable when the poem is read aloud, overpowered by an internal rhyme scheme that matches the baser grammatical structure of the sentence (inside me / guide me / join in / coin in / rafters / laughter / etc.) … yet, where the rhymes meet in the last couplet (holy, lowly), they become at once generically-recognizable and pleasantly audible: sonnet and doggerel; holy, lowly; funny, little. As in the best it is.}

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